The Change edition by Eva Smith Literature Fiction eBooks
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Ethan a young and bright scientist. Lisa Attractive co-researcher. Marshal Billionaire Fiance of Lisa. Sam Hot MMA Fighter
Things turn bad for Ethan and he finds himself turned into a Woman, who looks exactly like Lisa. Now Ethan not only has to fight his new feminine side, but also Lisa’s fiancé. With his new body, come new desires, new Lust and new attraction to the Hot MMA Fighter in town.
The second book of this series is available now - The Swap
WARNING This book contains mature scenes and is intended for mature audiences only.
Newly revised and edited on Nov. 12
The Change edition by Eva Smith Literature Fiction eBooks
It's a new story about accidental gender swap. Not just a swap, but appearing like his lab partner. Unfortunately, the change happened during an explosion where his lab partner and many other scientists are killed (including the inventor of the gender swap serum). So he/she seems Ok to others apart from memory loss. He/she doesn't like her fiancé, but likes his brother/cousin (author is confused about this). When she's ready to try the gender swap experiment again, an unexplained intrigue intervenes.The idea is good, but the author writes like English isn't her native language. So there are many (MANY) hard to read sentences. It's badly in need of re-editing, or even, a total re-write.
The ending seems unfinished. Some lose ends not tidied up, and the intrigue remains unexplained. Not recommended, unless you are prepared to suffer thru the bad English.
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The Change edition by Eva Smith Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
was ok
You get what you pay for... I can't complain that this was free. Not worth reading even for the low, low price of free.
It about a young brilliant scientist and a young beautiful assistant. Who goes to a science show. One device about could change the physical sex from one to another sex. Then a explosion. That cause death of many people. Ethan mind was accidental transferred into his beautiful assistant. At the time he didn't realize that he was occupied into her body. He faked a memory lost. Because they wouldn't believe that he was someone else. So he at to act like her as best as possible. He found out she engaged to her boyfriend. He acted more like she was the same person. But she wasn't. But he started to act more like a girl than a guy. She started sort of boyish. But as ignored because accident. She starting become more of a girl. Why because of the hormone of the body he was in. Later her ex-boyfriend her marry him. She couldn't. Thou her was her. But not her. Because he had general knowledge her live. She found her boyfriends brother want to help her. She basically constructed the formulate. And then to two crooks. Wanted something thing that her known about. They drank the formulae and was turn into women. They were surprise and shocked.
Good read! Eva Smith has written a very good book about bisexual relationships. Worth reading this book! A very fast read.
The Change by Eva Smith is a good story with excitement and good twists. Would have given a better rating but do not like to purchase more books to read the end of the story.
Two words Spell Check!!! You know, if I were to publish something that someone other than my mom were going to read, I think I'd ask a friend or two, to read it first for errors. Grammar, spelling, context, etc. Even if I lived alone in a cave in Siberia, in this day and age, I just don't understand how people publish things without putting their work through spell check first.
That aside, it was overall, kind of a crappy story. The main character Ethan/Lisa kind of seemed devoid of any emotion. People close to him die and he changes gender and he reacts about as much as if he was making out a grocery list. Eggs, salt, I'm a chick, bread, waffles...
And of course, my single most annoying peeve of all is the unmentioned cliff hanger. This is either the classic example or the author passed away mid story, which could very well explain the excessive typos.
My overall opinion, skip this skunker. Even free, it's a waste of money.
This story approached the gender change genre from a different angle than most, with an actual story behind it, rather than just an excuse to write steamy sex scenes. Those are present too, but they're not gratuitous. The accidental change works very well, and the general gist of how the character reacts to the change, as well as reacting to the death of his lab partner (who he is now impersonating) is quite realistic.
The thing that's not realistic is the writing and the grammar. In addition to some spelling and word choice mistakes, the author writes dialogue that clearly does not feel like how people would actually speak. Now, the other reviewer here suggested that this was because English is not the author's first language, but it also felt like the author submitted the first draft as the kindle book, as evidenced by the presence of [?] several times, as if the author wasn't sure of a particular word. Yes, that's good to include when you're writing to remind yourself to check later, but take it out before you publish the manuscript!
So there you have it. Maybe the author will go through and edit the book (or have a professional editor edit it) and then this review will be out of date, but until then, my current review stands. If you can suspend your disbelief enough to ignore the basic writing flaws, though, you'll enjoy this book.
It's a new story about accidental gender swap. Not just a swap, but appearing like his lab partner. Unfortunately, the change happened during an explosion where his lab partner and many other scientists are killed (including the inventor of the gender swap serum). So he/she seems Ok to others apart from memory loss. He/she doesn't like her fiancé, but likes his brother/cousin (author is confused about this). When she's ready to try the gender swap experiment again, an unexplained intrigue intervenes.
The idea is good, but the author writes like English isn't her native language. So there are many (MANY) hard to read sentences. It's badly in need of re-editing, or even, a total re-write.
The ending seems unfinished. Some lose ends not tidied up, and the intrigue remains unexplained. Not recommended, unless you are prepared to suffer thru the bad English.
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